Wednesday, October 15, 2014

News, Feature, and Sports Photography


This sports photo uses the rule of thirds in the photography to make it an eye catching photo.

This photo is very effective news photography picture because of the story it tells and the intense emotion that is embedded within it.

This feature story photo is depicts effective photography because of the selective focus that is used.




most effective print ads


This print ad displays many of the great virtues that a picture uses to be considered as professional photography, such as the rule of thirds is used. Along with the photography methods used, the ad uses a great amount of emotion.

This ad has good style in it which is attractive to the eye. Along with style it also uses maybe a little bit of truth, if you normally don't eat breakfast at all.

This ad has all four of the ad elements that are used to make a good ad, but in particular persuasion is the most effective element used in the ad.


1. & 2: http://www.adweek.com/news/advertising-branding/worlds-17-best-print-campaigns-2013-14-158466

3. http://www.wookmark.com/image/35904/30-award-winning-print-ads

Inverted Pyramid nonsense

The inverted pyramid structure was followed precisely in this article as I analyze how:
The lead contains almost all of the basic information that is covered in the story that is all very vital to the story.
The beginning  body paragraphs contains much more information and details about how the virus was contracted and that the nurse was restricted to public transportation, even though she took a plane. Much of the information was needed to get a better look at the situation.
The following paragraphs contained the information concerning the CDC and the actions they took in trying to isolate the patient and cleaning the apartment and plane that was potentially contaminated by the nurse. The information was not as important but still proved better detail on the case.
The last of the paragraph go into extreme detail about the precautions that are being taken to prevent the virus by isolating anyone they think has come in contact. Most of the information is not essential to the story, yet it is still interesting to read.
 A second Texas nurse who has tested positive for Ebola violated infection control guidelines by flying on a commercial jetliner from Cleveland to Dallas the night before she arrived at the hospital with a fever, officials said today.
The nurse, who has been identified as Amber Vinson, 29, was part of the team at Texas Health Presbyterian Hospital who took care of Thomas Eric Duncan, a Liberian man who died of Ebola on Oct. 8.
She is the second member of the hospital staff to contract the virus and a Dallas official warned today that additional cases among the hospital's health care workers are a "very real possibility.
Vinson was one of the nurses who was very involved with the care for Ebola patient Duncan, who died of Ebola at the Dallas hospital. She drew his blood, inserted catheters, and dealt with his bodily fluids, according to Duncan's medical records obtained by the Associated Press.
"Because at that point she was in a group of individuals known to have exposure to Ebola, she should not have traveled on a commercial airline," said Dr. Thomas Frieden, director of the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. "From this moment forward, we will ensure that no individual monitored for exposure undergoes travel in any way other than controlled movement," he said referring to non-public transportation, such as a personal car or chartered flight.
Vinson reported a slightly elevated temperature of 99.5 degrees to the CDC prior to flying to Ohio, ABC News confirmed. According to a CDC official, since she didn't meet the 100.4 degree threshold for a fever, she wasn't "told she couldn't fly."
Vinson has since been transferred from Dallas to Emory University Hospital in Atlanta, Georgia, which has successfully treated other Ebola patients.
President Obama was supposed to visit New Jersey and Connecticut today, but he canceled the trip to hold a cabinet meeting in the White House to coordinate a response to the Ebola outbreak.
The CDC is reaching out to the 132 passengers who flew with the woman on Frontier Airlines Flight 1143 on Monday evening, landing in Dallas at 8:16 p.m. The health care worker had no symptoms during the flight, the CDC said, but officials are identifying and notifying passengers because she arrived at the hospital with a fever the following morning.
Among those passengers was a group of employees - mostly nurses - from Cleveland Clinic and MetroHealth, the hospitals said Wednesday. They were returning from a conference in Texas.
Those employees are on paid leave as an “extra precautionary step” while their health is monitored daily, the hospitals said.
Once the Frontier Airlines flight landed in Dallas, the plane was cleaned for the evening before flying out the next day, according to a statement from Frontier Airlines, which said its procedures are "consistent with CDC guidelines." It was cleaned again in Cleveland the following night.
Frieden said that although the patient was self-monitoring because she had helped take care Thomas Duncan, a Liberian man who died of Ebola at the Dallas hospital. Although her temperature didn't meet the 104 degree "threshold," he said she had a temperature of 99.5 degrees.
Both nurses who became infected had contact with Duncan in his first days in the Dallas hospital -- on Sept. 28, 29 and 30 -- when he was having "substantial amounts" of vomiting and had diarrhea, according to Frieden. He said officials will be assessing other health workers who had extensive contact with Duncan on these days.
“The fight against Ebola in Dallas is a two-front fight now,” Dallas County Judge Clay Jenkins said, speaking at a morning press conference.
Authorities said they are now tracking 75 people following the second hospital worker’s diagnosis. The unidentified health care worker reported a fever Tuesday and was isolated at the hospital, authorities said.
The preliminary Ebola test was run late Tuesday at the state public health laboratory in Austin, and results were received at about midnight, authorities said. The Centers for Disease Control and Prevention has begun confirmation testing.
The woman was put into isolation within 90 minutes, and she is dealing with her diagnosis "with grit and grace," Jenkins said.
Authorities said this may not be the last case to be found among the hospital’s staff.
"We are preparing contingencies for more and that is a very real possibility," Jenkins said.
Dallas Mayor Mike Rawlings also suggested additional people may get sick.
"It may get worse before it gets better, but it will get better,” the mayor said.
Dr. Daniel Varga of Texas Health Resources defended practices at the hospital, which has faced criticism amid the Ebola diagnoses.
“It’s clear there was an exposure somewhere, sometime in our treatment of Duncan. Let’s be clear we’re a hospital that serves this community extremely well,” Varga said at the press conference.
“We’re the first to diagnose and treat this insidious disease that has attacked two of our own.”
City workers went to the neighborhood of the second patient early this morning to knock on doors to alert people to the news and to be alert to possible symptoms. They handed out flyers and later began robo calls to the area, Varga said.
Rawlings said the community remains vigilant.
“The only way that we are going to beat this is person by person, moment by moment, detail by detail,” Rawlings said. "While Dallas is anxious about this … We are not fearful.”
Health officials interviewed the patient, hoping to track down any contacts or potential exposures in the community, the CDC said in a statement.
"While this is troubling news for the patient, the patient’s family and colleagues and the greater Dallas community, the CDC and the Texas Department of State Health Services remain confident that wider spread in the community can be prevented with proper public health measures including ongoing contact tracing, health monitoring among those known to have been in contact with the index patient and immediate isolations if symptoms develop," the CDC said in a statement.
Authorities visited the patient's apartment this morning to begin decontamination efforts.

Best Headlines

The headline Dallas nurses: 'There were no protocols' for ebola is an excellent headline. It is an excellent headline it is rid of all unnecessary words and it catches the eye due to the fact that it concerns ebola in America

The headline Gunshot residue found on clothing, body of teen shot by ST. Louis officer is a very attention getting headline. Perhaps it is a bit wordy for a well written headline, but what is being said in the headline could grab anybody's attention.

I think that Cops: Boy, 10, kills woman, 90, for yelling at him is maybe not the best written headline, but it is the most attention getting headline that has possibly ever been made. To support my theory that this one of the best headlines ever is because it is one of the most ridiculous events to take place.

U.S. Marine is charged with murder in death of transgender woman in Philippines is a strong headline because of all the information released before the article even begins. It is also a very eye grabbing and peaks your curiosity on the details of the murder or if it was an intended hate crime.

The headline Highschool football player charged with rape quits team is a very effectively written headline. The headline is very attention getting and many readers would find it very intriguing whether the kid was convicted.

Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Examples of Properly Written Leads

Well written leads:

I believe this a good display of a properly written lead because of all the information that is released early in the story. It is also a good lead because it lets the reader want to keep reading about it if it concerns them in any way.

This is a well written lead because it identifies many of the 5 W's and H. On the contrary, it leaves you puzzled to whether anyone was hurt or how extensive the damage was, which makes you want to continue reading.

Choosing this as a well written lead was an obvious choice. Not only does it concern Nebraskan's, but almost everything that would be in the article was covered in the first few sentences.

This lead is proven a well written lead for many reasons. The lead is very eye grabbing, which makes you want to continue on with the story and finish reading the entire article. Also it is very informative about the information that the article contains.

I chose this as a well written lead because it can relate to a very wide audience. The movie ghostbusters was a enormous hit in the 90's when it was originally was released and a large amount of people who would read the lead would continue on with the rest of the story because of their interest with the movie.

Elements of a Lead

Identifying the elements of a lead is now a breeze because I have taken journalism. 

The news article's lead 5 W's and H is as follows:

Who: Jacques Rougerie
What: Construction of SeaOrbiter 
Where: France
When: This Spring
Why: Research and development is complete
How: 30 years of research culminated 

The Semester in a Paragraph

This term in journalism, I feel as if I have gained more from the class than majority of other classes could teach me. Not only have I learned how to critically analyze news stories, but I have properly learned how to write a news story using journalistic elements. Continuing on, analyzing news stories from a different perspective has allowed me to properly identify things such as bias, improper leads and headlines, and other things such as improper structure to the story. Other things I have gained from this class was how to properly interview people to gain information out of them without making them incredibly uncomfortable or how to sell specific things to businesses. Selling things such as ad placements for a yearbook to businesses is now a breeze for me and now that I have the knowledge on how to dress, what to say, and how to sell it.
            Not only have I gained a great amount of knowledge from this course, but I have also given some things in return. To start off, as a journalism student I feel as if I have been a critical member of the journalism team; things such as writing the news for the football games has been almost my full responsibility alone. Along with writing the football stories every week, I have tried to take part in photography of sport and other events as much as I possibly can. As well as writing for the team, I have also sold my amount of ads for the yearbook to allow them to be sold at a cheaper price.